"Link exits the temple and finds himself in a 70s mall constructed in the future...."
"Link exits the temple and finds himself in a 70s mall constructed in the future...."
I wasn't even thinking about Zelda when I made this lol. I made a song called "Forest Temple" a while back. And I was like, "lemme just continue the temple thing". But, it's a funny thing to think about.
Heyyy dude, this is a fun track, and a great exercise in self-limitation. I like the ring mod sound of the melody. My ears are searching for more short-term variation and high-frequency content, something like a second hats pattern or high-pitched arpeggiator. Perhaps a more agressive bass eventually to match the power of the drums. I feel the track wants to go somewhere further.
I think you're right. It was a big limb to go out on and a lot of fun. Thanks!
worst/10 also it starts in G minor you hack fraud
i rember now :))) thank you!!!
Super cool. I like the space you've created, nice panning and combination of reverb'd and dry elements, along with the subtle flange in that FM-sounding loop. Great work (i cri evertim)
thank you for this review, really inspiring, hope you'll check out the rest of my work to see what's up, all the best!!!
This track captures the spirit of Newgrounds so well. It takes me back to the mid 2000s: fast tempo, acid lines, catchy melody, phat bass, and that quintissential brickwall slamming limiter.
I think most of your mixing issues can be fixed with some high pass filters and other EQ to iron out the spots where instruments are fighting for space, and some dynamic EQ like TDR Nova if it's really spaghetti. Some of the space might clear up by letting off the limiter input, and the sweet spot would not sound any quiter, but that's a stylistic choice.
Your music is super captivating and immersive. Holy moly
Thank you so very much! High pass and EQ could definitely be used more, I agree. I'm really glad you like it!
This is a cool piece. Great proto-stride feel, catchy melody, tension and release.
I would love to hear some realism and breath injected, to match the lovely notation. Pianists almost always pedal after notes begin for a legato sound and to avoid sudden drops in volume, apart from the times you intentionally want that. Slightly randomize note-on and velocity. Most importantly, go nuts with tempo automation; shape tempo and velocity with the phrasing like a concert pianist. Contrast is king.
Side note: There's some clipping in spots like the initial phrase and it's recap at 1:50, which could be a gainstage issue within the sampler itself. I used to have that problem in Keyscape, and I solved it by going into Settings, lowering Gain to -10dB, and then bumping up the volume in my daw before the signal hits the master limiter.
Great work dude. With some humanizing and gainstage adjustment, this could sound like a legit concert recording.
Alright thanks. Something to think about here. I'll start working on this again when I'm not tired and I might take some of your suggestions into account, because you do have a point. In my opinion this could also be a bit longer, so that you have something to immerse yourself into. But the things you said in the side note are true, I'm just too lazy to fix those kind of issues that actually are important to fix to make this sound authentic.
Yooo, I just found your work, and it's cool to hear your take on trance. I hear the passion you put into your music, which is always refreshing. Keep it up dude.
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed this track! It means a lot. <3
Heck yeah, this slaps severely. I recently discovered you, so I don't have the history your other listeners have, but it will be cool to find out how your DnB style changes whenever you decide to return to it. Take that phat break, and maybe explore some different soundscapes. I can barely stick to a genre for two tracks in a row.
Edit: Cool, you do you. Genre hopping is a lot of fun; no need to stick to any one thing, especially if it's not fulfilling.
Thank you but I've actually decided to quit DnB completely. There is a video on my youtube channel where I explain it more.
Heck yeah, great hollywood harmony and proof of concept. I've had vague thoughts of doing something like this. Now I might have to try to get on your level haha. I think with a very careful dip around 5Khz and perhaps a slight bump in volume and reverb send, you'll get a choir that both blends and shines more. I know it can be tricky to sculpt a hall sound with a close-ish mic, not to meantion getting dynamic range in the low range of the voice. Great work with a great challenge.
Hey, thank you so much for your advices! I have tried to realize them by now. I have to agree that working with close-range recordings is quite hard and the atmosphere would have been even better with another type of microphone. But I tried to bump the reverb and volume by a little bit. I also recreated the high tenor notes and I have resung them with more "twang" being used. So that's the best I could do for now. I hope at least there is a little improvement noticeable. Especially the staccatos at 03:47 and 5:50 should sound better now. :)
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